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The Dragon's Bite
And as the great white beast
has slumbered in its cave
his younger brother came.
The village was not safe.
He flew through town at dusk
and gnawed on beast and man.
He burned a house or two,
just because he can.
The village, scorched and bruised,
have tried to hold their own
for hard times they have passed
to reap what they have sewn.
Now great white beast arose.
He roared and teeth he gnashed,
and swept like a tsunami
and burned the town to ash.
The white big flow swept through,
amidst the dark of child’s skin.
And man and women, too,
were torn from head to shin.
He penetrated deep
and gorged on every head,
exposed the white pure flesh
and now they all are dead.
He came, not once but thrice,
and ripped them all asunder,
thus all the town at once
was buried six feet under.
A year of hard felt work
to keep the beast at bay,
has come to bitter end:
The price, they had to pay.
A cautionary tale
will be forever told,
of each erected stone,
of bodies laying cold.
Now dragon white and
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Literature
The Year Of The Dragon
A year has come and a year has gone.
New vistas of the past Anew and fresh.
Slipping on patches of white.
Floods erupt from the depths of hell,
yet they cannot extinguish
for they were not forewarned.
A new year has ended.
Solitude and joyless fields
caught fire time and again by the maw of the dragon.
Now ashes smolder and dragon caged.
Marked by the twelve hundred and twenty five
and guarded by the strength of the weak.
Six turn into one.
The cell of freedom grows; its spaces close its grip tighter still.
The year of the white dragon has come and gone.
A new year has begun, growing out of the old.
Clouds hover above, a prophecy of the beast.
A year has passed and it is still day one.
Of the seven, only three escape unscathed.
The dragon’s claws have dug deep.
The soft gets harder with every passing day.
The pure grow further out of reach.
Fear of its escape engulfs the frail.
The seven stand guard. Next, death may come.
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Literature
Fortune Mirage
And it starts to rain, in an apathetic wasteland
Gold coin, bar and thread
Thy thirst cannot be quenched, thou lie in the sand
Showered with suffocating wealth that brings the dread
Perhaps a fool’s gold a leprechaun had left
Perhaps it will vanish into thinnest of air.
The load shall be lifted and leave thee bereft
of joy and hope with naught but despair
But joy goes amiss as the dread shroud conceals
Thy body and mind are too fraught with disdain
“Begone!” thou bawl at emptiness that reveals
that no riches can fill all the holes that remain.
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a part of story i had written

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Eddie Domínguez (Pen name)
Artist | Hobbyist | Varied
Israel
Long to write, Desire to be great! any tips suggestions and comments to aid this goal will be greatly appreciated

Favourite style of art: optical illusions
Personal Quote: if hell were cold and i'd be bold i'd stride right through before i'm old

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Interests
Alas, it is no longer a single occurance or a single repeat. And so I have decided to log my failures in order to judge just how badly I'm doing. If you have no idea what I'm talking about, I do beg your pardon but I will probably explain it no further.

Stumble #1 at 000012:
It's Just A Matter Of TimeToday is hard.
I slip; only a little.
But I slip.
Progress done.
All is gone.
The darkness summons.
So tempting, so bright.
The darkness lures me.
Trapped, trapped in limbo.
I cannot stop myself.
I slip, I grasp at straws.
Mustn't fall, mustn't drop.
Hanging at the edge of a crumbling precipice,
my rock crumbles to dust.
The intangible becomes nonexistent.
I want to scream.
But I know my voice will be the end of me.
Even a whisper will pierce my like a knife.
There can be no helping hand.
There can be no shoulder to cry on.
There can be no light at the end of this drop.
The monster overtook me;
I put my foot in the pool of temptation,
and sunk right in.
And then came the sounds calling me.
I approached the forbidden grounds.
I knelt, helpless to resist.
I slipped, I fell.
Fear grasped at my throat.
A mountain of promises a smoky remnant of what was.
I pull myself back, standing at the edge.
Darkness on all sides as I'm held by a lie.
The darkness calls from far away.
It's just a matter


Stumble #2 at 000504:
A Goal Is ShatteredOut of my element, out of my mind
A mission so short lived, a mission so hard
at ease with the world of dark and calm
Peace flows from recesses of silence
loud stream of soundless sound plays
warmth not yet cooled infuses hopeful times
Thought of nothing is filled with thoughts of everything
pushed away only to be replaced by others
every attempt failed, every failure abolished
constant battle for dominance
And then it comes, out of thin air
airless air carried on windless wind
filling the open space of all time
grasping at life, squeezing the life out of it
yearning to hasten a long wait for death
thought suffocates under the tendrils of death
thoughtlessness filled with an urgent despair
every crevice of mind both empties and fills
leaving room for nothing but a plea to flee
eyes pop open, legs pop up, relocation complete
in one swift moment a goal is shattered
outside the cloud of ash, beyond the hail of death
sinking into place once more but alas the calm is gone
there is no return


Stumble #3 at 000610:
Return Of The Dragon'Twas cheerful party day.
The dragon kept away.
But now returned it had,
and set a trap, 'twas bad.
A gash, a burn, a scar.
It pressed the crowd too far.
Though blood it failed to spill,
and chased back up the hill,
from there it looks on down
and plans to raze the town.
The people now in dread
 that soon they'll all be dead.
They must be strong and stay,
to keep the beast at bay.
What's left to do is pray
it won't return to slay.
But its return is sure.
It won't withstand the lure.
And maybe next attack,
they'll fail to send it back.
That day may come too soon,
before the crescent moon.
Severe will be the cost;
the town forever lost.
  • Listening to: Nothing
  • Reading: Reading this journal over
  • Watching: Nothing
  • Playing: Nothing
  • Eating: Nothing
  • Drinking: Nothing

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needlenude Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2017  New Deviant Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
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DoubleDandE Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2017   General Artist
Happy Birthday today! Hope you have a tasty and wonderful day today! :) 
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks :hug: . it wasn't too bad. mostly just an ordinary day. haven't had my cake yet. will in a few hours :eager:
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DoubleDandE Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2017   General Artist
You're Welcome. 
Oh nice. I hope it's good. 
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
not great. it was ok. at least it looked great though. that's half the battle. who knows, maybe next year i can make a cake that's tasty AND looks good
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PennedinWhite Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Happy Birthday!!!! :heart: :rose:
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :hug:
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PennedinWhite Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Of course! :hug:
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IamNoHere Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2017
Hi, happy birthday!:)
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :tighthug: haven't seen you in a while
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IamNoHere Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2017
You are welcome:)

I wasn't in the chat for some time. It doesn't work:/ I'll need a newer Java.
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
if you're working with firefox it no longer supports it :( chrome works though and i'm not sure but i think internet explorer does as well. not sure about edge or other browsers
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
sorry for letting you down :ashamed:
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straight-butch29 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, Eddie. Long time no see :huggle:
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
long time indeed. how've you been dear?
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straight-butch29 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Kinda fucked but happy cuz' 2ND YEAR'S FINALLY OVER! :woohoo:
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
naww why fucked? and woot! how many to go?
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Desert-Carnation006 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2016  Professional General Artist
do you like fallout?
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
never played it. i don't care for nuclear fallout. creeps me out.
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Desert-Carnation006 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2016  Professional General Artist
I never played it either but the art style and vintage feel you get from it can't not be inspiring.
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
if you say so
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NeevaDash Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Storyteller doesn't open.. What's causing that
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah. it has issues :sigh: still needs some work. i should take it off for now
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