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Wings

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I strap the wings on tight and start to run uphill
and when I reach the edge I leap into the air
and as I soar above I flap my new found wings
I shoot high into space much faster than a rocket

The sun is up ahead I'm blinded by the light
but fascinated still I keep the course the same
and as I'm close enough to touch the scorching ball
my waxen wings melt down and I begin to fall
written for NaPoWriMo 2015 day #28

new prompts were not put up so i used mine like usual plus another from NaPoWriMo:
aspiredwriter.deviantart.com/j…
and one from:
crliterature.deviantart.com/jo…

prompts are:
1. deceived
2. Icarus


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