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It was a time of grief
departure was so brief
they rose and picked their feet
and walked into the heat
The sun had stroked their head
for water they had prayed
and many years since then
a time of tradition
We crush and mix and make
no bread nor pie or cake
for water shall not scour
where there may be some flour
But out of driest days
abundant water stays
while flour goes away
a week hence from today
So water fills our food
and raises our good mood
and to remember days
when Egypt thrived off slaves
We make our own concrete
but not to build, to eat
haroset we now get
not dry but blissfully wet
There's more food, by the way
but those another day
will get their proper place
haroset we now taste
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poem for NaPoWriMo 2015 day #02
two prompts. one form:
aspiredwriter.deviantart.com/j…
and one from:
www.deviantart.com/journal/NaP…
prompts are: haroset and water
P.S.
sorry for pawning off such shit here
All rights reserved, do not copy or use in any way without explicit permission from writer - Eddie Domingez. (AKA AspiredWriter)
I sure would appreciate any comments and critiques you may have to aid me in improving, thanks.
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feel free to ask anything
two prompts. one form:
aspiredwriter.deviantart.com/j…
and one from:
www.deviantart.com/journal/NaP…
prompts are: haroset and water
P.S.
sorry for pawning off such shit here
All rights reserved, do not copy or use in any way without explicit permission from writer - Eddie Domingez. (AKA AspiredWriter)
I sure would appreciate any comments and critiques you may have to aid me in improving, thanks.
Click here to create a critique!
feel free to ask anything
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Love the imagery.