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Gamma Draconis ch01p02 by Allantiee

ok, here's a small tidbit of what i think. not great with visual art so i'll give it my best shot. one thing that bothers me here is th...

Love Song by reiashford

first off i must point out that i'm not that knowledgable with visual art however i'll put my two cents in here. that thing on the righ...


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Eddie Domínguez (Pen name)
Artist | Hobbyist | Varied
Israel
Long to write, Desire to be great! any tips suggestions and comments to aid this goal will be greatly appreciated

Favourite style of art: optical illusions
Personal Quote: if hell were cold and i'd be bold i'd stride right through before i'm old

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Interests
Alas, it is no longer a single occurance or a single repeat. And so I have decided to log my failures in order to judge just how badly I'm doing. If you have no idea what I'm talking about, I do beg your pardon but I will probably explain it no further.

Stumble #1 at 000012:
It's Just A Matter Of TimeToday is hard.
I slip; only a little.
But I slip.
Progress done.
All is gone.
The darkness summons.
So tempting, so bright.
The darkness lures me.
Trapped, trapped in limbo.
I cannot stop myself.
I slip, I grasp at straws.
Mustn't fall, mustn't drop.
Hanging at the edge of a crumbling precipice,
my rock crumbles to dust.
The intangible becomes nonexistent.
I want to scream.
But I know my voice will be the end of me.
Even a whisper will pierce my like a knife.
There can be no helping hand.
There can be no shoulder to cry on.
There can be no light at the end of this drop.
The monster overtook me;
I put my foot in the pool of temptation,
and sunk right in.
And then came the sounds calling me.
I approached the forbidden grounds.
I knelt, helpless to resist.
I slipped, I fell.
Fear grasped at my throat.
A mountain of promises a smoky remnant of what was.
I pull myself back, standing at the edge.
Darkness on all sides as I'm held by a lie.
The darkness calls from far away.
It's just a matter


Stumble #2 at 000504:
A Goal Is ShatteredOut of my element, out of my mind
A mission so short lived, a mission so hard
at ease with the world of dark and calm
Peace flows from recesses of silence
loud stream of soundless sound plays
warmth not yet cooled infuses hopeful times
Thought of nothing is filled with thoughts of everything
pushed away only to be replaced by others
every attempt failed, every failure abolished
constant battle for dominance
And then it comes, out of thin air
airless air carried on windless wind
filling the open space of all time
grasping at life, squeezing the life out of it
yearning to hasten a long wait for death
thought suffocates under the tendrils of death
thoughtlessness filled with an urgent despair
every crevice of mind both empties and fills
leaving room for nothing but a plea to flee
eyes pop open, legs pop up, relocation complete
in one swift moment a goal is shattered
outside the cloud of ash, beyond the hail of death
sinking into place once more but alas the calm is gone
there is no return


Stumble #3 at 000610:
Return Of The Dragon'Twas cheerful party day.
The dragon kept away.
But now returned it had,
and set a trap, 'twas bad.
A gash, a burn, a scar.
It pressed the crowd too far.
Though blood it failed to spill,
and chased back up the hill,
from there it looks on down
and plans to raze the town.
The people now in dread
 that soon they'll all be dead.
They must be strong and stay,
to keep the beast at bay.
What's left to do is pray
it won't return to slay.
But its return is sure.
It won't withstand the lure.
And maybe next attack,
they'll fail to send it back.
That day may come too soon,
before the crescent moon.
Severe will be the cost;
the town forever lost.
  • Listening to: Nothing
  • Reading: Reading this journal over
  • Watching: Nothing
  • Playing: Nothing
  • Eating: Nothing
  • Drinking: Nothing

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:iconstraight-butch29:
straight-butch29 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, Eddie. Long time no see :huggle:
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:iconaspiredwriter:
AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
long time indeed. how've you been dear?
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:iconstraight-butch29:
straight-butch29 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Kinda fucked but happy cuz' 2ND YEAR'S FINALLY OVER! :woohoo:
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:iconaspiredwriter:
AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
naww why fucked? and woot! how many to go?
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Desert-Carnation006 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2016  Professional General Artist
do you like fallout?
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:iconaspiredwriter:
AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
never played it. i don't care for nuclear fallout. creeps me out.
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:icondesert-carnation006:
Desert-Carnation006 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2016  Professional General Artist
I never played it either but the art style and vintage feel you get from it can't not be inspiring.
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
if you say so
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NeevaDash Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Storyteller doesn't open.. What's causing that
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:iconaspiredwriter:
AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah. it has issues :sigh: still needs some work. i should take it off for now
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:iconneevadash:
NeevaDash Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Probably. Or put WIP under it
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:iconaspiredwriter:
AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
link is off. sorry for the trouble
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llirbwerdnadivad Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2016
XD I remind me of that song, too, now!
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
*nom nom*
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Aankai-Rain Featured By Owner May 3, 2016  Student Interface Designer
tell me what you think of my Critique so I will know what want to know and also maybe cut jibber jabber all togather
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner May 3, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
תודה על המשוב. ראיתי שאתה ישראלי אז יוצא לי לכתוב קצת בעברית ;)
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Aankai-Rain Featured By Owner May 3, 2016  Student Interface Designer
אין בעיה אני שמח.
אני לוקח ביקורת
באינטרנט יותר כמו ביקורות בעיתון, אולם אני חושב שאולי כדי שלא אכתוב לך משוב של באמת. אני מאמין שאני לוקה בחלק הזה ובמקום זאת אני אעדיף לחולק איתך את נהירת המחשבות שלי בקריאת הטקסט שלך מדי פעם.
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner May 3, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
אוקיי
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TokyoNeko13 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2016  Professional General Artist
Pretty sure DA is little messed up haha
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
well my internet is for sure, it keeps logging me on and off. can't do almost anything online! but it might be the time of year. this time the whole country is probably online which crashes the system. just an idea
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TokyoNeko13 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2016  Professional General Artist
That's crazy lol :) why this time of year specifically?
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
passover is this weekend. all kids get vacation a couple of weeks before. parents used to sit them in front of the TV but nowadays they probably all be surfing and not in the sea :D . also this is a time that many go travelling so i assume people go online a lot for that (tickets, information etc.)
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CJ-Judd Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2016  Student General Artist
Thanks Eddie, I'm most appreciative.
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