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Gamma Draconis ch01p02 by Allantiee

ok, here's a small tidbit of what i think. not great with visual art so i'll give it my best shot. one thing that bothers me here is th...

Love Song by reiashford

first off i must point out that i'm not that knowledgable with visual art however i'll put my two cents in here. that thing on the righ...


:bulletpurple: well i don't know how this was before the edit (if you edited anything more than that one word) however you managed to show the event...

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Hanging by AspiredWriter
Hanging
Trimmed and resized but otherwised as taken.

light shined on the spider skewed the white background to this sickly green color.



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At the edge looking out.
A fall as deep as creation itself.
No light on the horizon.
Forced forward by the tip of a sword.
The end is near.

The Finale
the end of ends



All rights reserved, do not copy or use in any way without explicit permission from writer - Eddie Domingez. (AKA AspiredWriter)

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Socioretard
I am a Socioretard. don't know what it is? look carefully and you'll understand.
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Halcyon by AspiredWriter
Halcyon
glint of light shines through. saw it and had to capture it.




All rights reserved, do not copy or use in any way without explicit permission from writer - Eddie Domingez. (AKA AspiredWriter)
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with Eyes wide open, a brave person went to help and found the truth. seeing is believing:

www.facebook.com/photo.php?v=1…
  • Mood: Disgust
  • Watching: the true nature of things

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AspiredWriter
Eddie
Artist
Israel
Long to write, Desire to be great! any tips suggestions and comments to aid this goal will be greatly appreciated

Favourite style of art: optical illusions
Personal Quote: if hell were cold and i'd be bold i'd stride right through before i'm old
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SpokenAndDisclosed Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:licking:
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Sky-91 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
hey hey
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014
hellos
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Sky-91 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
long time eh
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014
indeed. how're you?
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Diamonds-Dont-Shine Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for your advice! :3
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TaiyokaiHybrid Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
(F.R.I.E.N.D.S.)
=Fight alongside you
=Respect you
=Involve you
=Encourage you
= Deserve you
=Save you

Send this to all your friends and me if I'm one.
If you get 4 back you are liked, but if you get 7 back then you are seriously loved
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straight-butch29 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey...you're online right now. I saw you reply my comments XP 
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
no, but i'm online now
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straight-butch29 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah rite. I don't see you anywhere in GBW! :stinkeye:
Anyway, I'm gonna collapse into bed now so nitez for now, honey. :huggle:
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
i saw you online! and then you left! :nuu: and then i left ('cause i had a class) and now you're gone again! :nuu: but now i have the whole weekend :w00t: but have so much to do... :faint: so let me know when you are on. i'll be mostly on probably :smooch:
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j-death-k-scythe-c Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
you're welcome :) :huggle:
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straight-butch29 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh...just realized that I missed your b'day (Or are you too busy fucking me in your head to notice that I forgot it? :slow:)

Anyways...Happy 30th birthday. :kiss:
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
Aww thank you :aww: :smooch: yeah that must be it =p or perhaps it is that i'm used to no one noticing/knowing/giving a fuck :shrug:

It'd be great to have a girlfriend that would care if i lived or died and would notice the difference but i'm used to my lonliness so if i want something it's up to me to do it. It is how my tradition of baking my own birthday cake started oh... i don't know... maybe half a decade ago.

I loved that you noticed (albeit half a week later ;p )

If you ever make it here i'll save you a piece of that year's cake. :aww:

:heart:
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straight-butch29 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're such a sweetheart :smooch:
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
Am i really?
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straight-butch29 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Finally, a reply. :faint: Oh really? Do people really do that to you? That's sad...Don't worry then; I'm here. :)
 p.s. Did you see my note- the one that I just sent you?  
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
There is no note :tears:
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
Do people do what to me? :o nope. You wrote me another note? :eager: i'll go check it out now
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straight-butch29 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Eddie, you have to help me...:'(
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
i only just saw. what's up?
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straight-butch29 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
They banned me from WriteRoom just for using a single swear word... 
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TaiyokaiHybrid Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I took out my OC's name and changed a couple of things. The only problem was that when I edited it, the whole thing was bold, and I can't get it to turn off ^^; . Guess I just have to be careful from now on. Thanks again for the advice.
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AspiredWriter Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013
no problem :aww: (i came back)
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TaiyokaiHybrid Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D Yay.
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